ALL YOUR ESSAYS MUST BE PUBLISHED ON YOUR BLOG !!! and they all must be illustrated with an image !
Composition 1 Description : My best friend ( in class ) ( example )
Composition 2: A film review ( in class )
Second term
.Composition 3 Narrative text: The most remarkable day of my Christmas holidays ( in class )
.Composition 4: Reader
Third term
.Composition 5 Formal email
Option A: Write a formal email to the Council complaining about one of the following aspects;
-In your town there are not enough facilities and activities for teenagers: cinemas, concerts, leisure centres...
-The Council should offer more summer activities to teenagers who are under 16: public swimmingpool, free sports competitions...
-In the parks of your town there are too many dog poops
Option B: Write a formal email to the principal of your school ( directora )complaining about the following aspect :
-In your school there aren't enough toilets and mirrors and there should be more classrooms.
Deadline: 29th March
EXAMPLE: Visit to Water Centre 27th October 2010
Third term
.Composition 5 Formal email
Option A: Write a formal email to the Council complaining about one of the following aspects;
-In your town there are not enough facilities and activities for teenagers: cinemas, concerts, leisure centres...
-The Council should offer more summer activities to teenagers who are under 16: public swimmingpool, free sports competitions...
-In the parks of your town there are too many dog poops
Option B: Write a formal email to the principal of your school ( directora )complaining about the following aspect :
-In your school there aren't enough toilets and mirrors and there should be more classrooms.
Deadline: 29th March
EXAMPLE: Visit to Water Centre 27th October 2010
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your attention how disappointed I was with the standard
of facilities at your new Water Centre. I have visited many Water Centres over
the years and was very much looking forward to this visit with my two young
children during the half term break.
Whilst many of the attractions were open, some of the main ones for children were closed or broken. The fun bridge was closed and the sand area had all but disappeared, consisting mainly of dirt and twigs. On top of this, the spray fountains were a great disappointment. Even the cafe looked ready to close for the season being only half stocked with child friendly food and drinks.
I brought all of the above to the attention of the duty manager but all he could offer as an excuse was that it was the end of the season. This is most irritating as, like other visitors that day, we did not pay end of season entrance prices.
I should be pleased to receive your comments. I hope that you can restore my confidence in Water Centres as an ideal venue for families.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs Tina Jones
Whilst many of the attractions were open, some of the main ones for children were closed or broken. The fun bridge was closed and the sand area had all but disappeared, consisting mainly of dirt and twigs. On top of this, the spray fountains were a great disappointment. Even the cafe looked ready to close for the season being only half stocked with child friendly food and drinks.
I brought all of the above to the attention of the duty manager but all he could offer as an excuse was that it was the end of the season. This is most irritating as, like other visitors that day, we did not pay end of season entrance prices.
I should be pleased to receive your comments. I hope that you can restore my confidence in Water Centres as an ideal venue for families.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs Tina Jones
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